Joined: Feb 9 2009

The Martian Council is to be used as a section specifically for fan fiction / role playing. Some basic etiquette below.

1. Please do not quote the ENTIRE post containing the story. It is unnecessary and makes you have to scroll a ton more just to see your 1-line comment. If you want to talk about a specific part of the story, then quote that, but please refrain from quoting the entire original post.

2. Try to give more feedback than a few words such as "This was great!" While that is encouraging to the original poster, try to give them a few reasons as to why it was great. Not only will this be a better use of your post, but it'll let the author know what everyone likes and he can focus on that more later.

3. Constructive Criticism - While there's not a lot of poor stories being written, if someone does, don't just give complete negatives, try to work in a few positives as well. A well balanced comment goes a long way towards someone improving their writing.

4. Please use proper punctuation, spelling, and grammar (except if used in dialogue where it deserves to be that way). Also, remember to space out your entries so it's not a huge wall of text. Hitting the "Enter" key a few times can really make a difference in someone reading your story, or just skipping over it.

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Joined: Jul 21 2008

So the martian council is a place for story telling?

Hmm, seems to have both the potencial of being interesting and boring at the same time :P ...

So who's willing to start this off?

-Assaultman67

Joined: Jul 19 2008

Once upon a time there were some miners. They were oppressed and then this guy named Parker saved the day, the end.

FIRST STORY CALLED IT :twisted:

(Or did Volition already use that plot?... nah)

"Miners, this is Eos, leader of the Red Faction. Our time has come. Workers in mine M4 have started the rebellion and are dying for you as we speak!"

Joined: Aug 4 2008

Glad to see that this board can get some use. I was wondering what the hell this was for and now that I found out I am very interested in writing something for it. just need to think of what, though...

Like, two dudes discussing a video of some footage of a crazy guy with a bloody hammer and several felled smokestacks or three miners and an EDF discussing with their guns their lives before they came to mars.

"In the end, what separates a man from a slave? Money? Power? No, a man chooses, a slave obeys."

Joined: Apr 25 2009

so now that i started it off with 2 stories, I'd like to read the stories of other people too :P. Start showing off your writing skills please xD, it ain't that hard ;)

check out my fan fic.

start here: --------> http://community.redfaction.com/forums/topic/1759
I have put links to the next part in each topic.